'Crying', A Poem by Me

[Bloody Kiss]

Crying

Can’t you see I’m crying?
Go away, leave me be.
I’d ask if I wanted your stupid sympathy.

Can’t you see I’m crying?
Don’t ask about it.
Ill never tell you.

Can’t you see I’m crying?
Why won’t you leave already?!
Can’t you tell I’m unsteady?

Can’t you see I’m crying?
Wait, you can?
You care?

You care.
Hah, yeah right.
You care like the day cares for night.

Don’t lie-
I can see it,
Even though it isn’t in your eyes.

Don’t lie-
It’s no use in trying to convince me.
I can tell.

Leave me alone!
This is just a charade.
You’re covering the lie like a masquerade.

Stop…
Go away, leave me be.
I’d….ask if I needed your sympathy.

I admit,
Just a bit,
That a drop of pity,
May be good for me.

More, more.
I like this feeling.
Like... An unwanted presence is peeling.

Farther and farther, away it flies.
No more scams, no more lies.

This pity is real?
Truthful,
Sincere?

Okay,
Just a bit more,
But when I’m done,
Leave.

Its okay, I’m crying,
Please don’t leave.
I admit….
That maybe I need your sympathy.

[Darknessfalls]

very good Mo Mo....your poem style reminds me of my own...However, mine are alot....hmm...darker? Kudos for you.

[Bloody Kiss]

Thankies. This was more of a bad, 2-Second OMG I NEED TO WRITE A POEM urge struck me an this peice of crap came from it. I usually write them with more feeling.

[Darknessfalls]

*nods* Mine are always full of feeling a depth...Lol..Its all from my bottled up feelings..I would post them on here if I wasnt so damn lazy.

[occasionallyinsane]

I am a horrid poet...I'm rather jealous now.
*clap-clap* Loverly, Mo Mo. ;D

[Bloody Kiss]

Hee...

Thankiees guys.

83

83 is da cool cat.

83