Wanted to create somthing of my own...

[pencil]

Shannon could hear the footsteps behind her as she
walked toward
home. The thought of being followed made her heart
beat faster. "You're
being silly, she told herself, "no one is following
you." To be safe, she
began to walk faster, but the footsteps kept up with
her
pace. She was afraid to look back and she was glad she
was almost
home. Shannon said a quick prayer, "God please get me
home safe." She saw
the porch light burning and she leaned against the
door for a moment,
relieved to be in the safety of her home. She glanced
out the window to see
if anyone was there. The sidewalk was empty.

I'm just getting started... Don't make fun of me!
You like?

[occasionallyinsane]

I say it's cool...but I have a word of advice for ya... you might wanna make it a bit more descriptive. Other than that, I give ya a thumbs up. ;D

[pencil]

*sigh* Thanks. But don't forget, it's meh first time, but I sure will use the tip ^_>